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Hello my fellow dreamers, novice writers, experienced novelists, and passionate readers. I’ve created this place as a means of creative freedom. Like you all I am one who loves to delve into the pages of a good story. I am deeply imaginative and am always thinking up some new character, or some new storyline. However, I have no place for those short stories to go. So I decided to create a place where those budding ideas can be shared, and most importantly where comments and feedback can be given. So here’s how it will work. I will post the beginning of a story (first chapter, introduction, prologue, or outline), and I would love for you to read and then tell me what you think! Be honest, but please not cruel. Constructive criticism is most welcome. If you like the characters, storyline, plot, ect…and would like to read more, let me know. If you aren’t thrilled then you are more than welcome to say so! My hope is to start this with myself and have others send in their storylines to be posted so that we can share ideas, feedback, and eventually writing success together!

Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Fool Me Once

I'm kicking this new blog and story posting off with one that my sister and I began working on a while back. We wrote the plot out together and fell absolutely in love with these two characters. They are absolutely polar opposites of one another and I hope that you will love them too! Please let me know if you would like to see more of this story and want to hear more about these characters. If you have advice on how to make it better, please comment with that as well!

Hope you enjoy....here goes! 

FOOL ME ONCE

            Jayda Daniels glanced out of the plane window. They were meant to arrive at the airport in Charlotte, North Carolina in about twenty minutes. Seven years was a long time, and she could have used a few more years to prepare before coming back to this place. She didn’t have that kind of time, though.
The disturbing call about her father’s failing health had shaken her resolve to never go back to Charlotte. In less than twenty-four hours after that call, she’d had a flight booked for the blasted place, and a hotel room reserved. She could have just stayed at her parent’s home, but Jayda refused to stay in that place. Seventeen years under a roof with her overbearing mother and sister had been enough.
For the past seven years, she and her father had pitched in money to fly him, and only him, to Italy, where she’d been living, for the holidays. He never asked her to come home, and she never mentioned going home. They had both agreed on this course of action, though they’d never discussed it.
God she still couldn’t believe he’d been sick for months and hadn’t told her. She’d had to hear about it from her mother, who’d called to inform Jayda that her father had been admitted into the hospital. The doctors were still unsure as to what the problem was. She was hoping that they pin-pointed whatever was causing her father to be ill and that it was nothing too serious. She couldn’t imagine losing him
“Are you thinking about him?”
The voice broke through Jayda’s thoughts, and she turned to her friend, Brock. When she had told him she was heading back to the states because of her father, he’d informed her that he would be coming with her. He wouldn’t discuss it with her. He’d just booked a plane ticket when she had. Honestly, Jayda was glad that Brock was coming. He’d become her best friend after arriving in Florence seven years ago.
They’d both been accepted into the Giotto Academy of the Arts Institute in Florence, Italy as juniors in high school. It had been a special jump start program offered to only the most talented, aspiring artists. The students who had gotten accepted had been granted the opportunity to move to Florence where they would finish out their remaining high school courses, while jumping right into the art program at the prestigious school. Scholarships were granted as well as housing programs, where these select students would live, learn, and work together until they went their separate ways after graduating with degrees. Except, she and Brock had never left Florence, but had stayed there rooming and working together.
Brock nudged her arm, making Jayda realize she still hadn’t answered. She knew that the him in question wasn’t her father, it was Cade Walker. Brock was the only person, outside of Charlotte that knew all about that humiliating part of her life and a one of the reasons why she’d ended up in Florence.
“No, I wasn’t thinking of him.” At least she hadn’t been at that particular moment. However, he’d already crossed her mind about a billion times before then.
“I know we’ve already discussed this”, Brock said, as he shuffled to get a little more comfortable in the seat. “But I’m just going to remind you again; he probably doesn’t even live there anymore”.
Jayda nodded. They’d discussed it before ever leaving Italy, so she knew that. However, there was still a fifty percent chance that he was still there. Plus, it wasn’t like he was the only one she was trying to avoid. She would be trying to avoid every student from Bradbury High, as well as her mother and sister, though she knew that avoiding either category of people would be impossible.
“I know. I’m good.”  She lied. She wasn’t good at liar. She and Brock both knew that, which was probably why he gave her a little grin before dropping the subject altogether.
Looking back out the window, Jayda’s mind went straight to that hazardous topic. Cade Walker. He’d been from an old money family, who prioritized by putting image at the top and people somewhere near the bottom. Cade had been every girl’s dream in Bradbury High. Everyone’s except hers. The two people couldn’t have been any farther apart on the high school spectrum if they’d tried, and who would have thought that she would fall for a guy not her type at all? A guy who had done whatever he liked, no matter whose feelings he was stepping all over.
Cade had been a rich, bad-boy jock, who cared more for his car than he did his girlfriend, which at the time had been her sister. He’d liked girls in general, parties, sports, and throwing his popularity around. At least that had been one side of him. He’d had a completely different side, and one that no one but herself had seen. Too bad the other side had won out in the end.
            She, on the other hand, had been nerdy, timid, and overweight; polar opposite of her beauty queen sister, Jaslyn. To this day she could still hear her mother pleading with her to be more like her sister. In other words, she’d been an embarrassment to her mother. While Jaslyn had thrived on attention, Jayda had enjoyed being invisible. Of course, she hadn’t been too invisible, because she’d still had plenty of friends. She had just preferred staying in the background instead of the forefront. Of course, staying in the background had been nearly impossible after the makeover she’d let her sister perform on her. She still remembered the first time Cade had commented on her new look…

Seven Years Earlier
            Seventeen year old, Jayda, stepped out of the car, pulling hopelessly at the fitted shorts her sister had made her wear.  How she’d let her sister talk her into wearing these shorts with this v-neck t-shirt was beyond her. But then her best friend, Kate, had always called her a pushover.
“Will you stop fidgeting with those stupid shorts.”, Kate said, walking around from the driver’s side of the car. “You look fantastic. Good genes and softball have done you proud and given you great legs”.
Great legs her behind. Her mother and sister had used the words “big” and “boned” too many times for Jayda to think now that she had great legs.
“I don’t feel like I have great legs.” Jayda replied, giving one more tug to her new clothes. “I feel ridiculous. Why did I agree to this makeover thing again?”
Kate smiled over at her. “Because you are a sucker, oh and you wanted a date for prom. So you figured it was time to stop wearing your trash bag clothes.”
Jayda shot her friend a mock, indignant scowl, not really upset, but still slightly defensive. “They were not trash bag clothes. They were comfortable.”
“And they totally did nothing for you. As your best friend, I’m allowed to say that.”
Kate had been super supportive since she’d allowed her sister to perform her little experiment.  She’d forced her to go shopping, and had taught her to do her makeup and hair. Usually it she sported a bare face and a curly pony-tail. No longer, though. Jaslyn had come at her with a flat iron and a tube of gunk called mascara. Now her hair fell straight and sleek down her back, while her eyelashes looked long and thick. Jayda couldn’t deny that the appearance in the mirror was improved. However, she felt so out of place as this “new and improved, work in progress”. Her sister’s words, not hers.
“Come on, it’s getting close to game time.” Kate said, motioning for her to get her feet in gear.
The Varsity baseball team at Bradbury had a winning streak, and with this being a championship game, everyone in town wanted to be here to support the team. Jayda and Kate made their way up to the field, and were just about to start up the stairs of the stadium seating to find a seat when her name was called. Jayda turned, finding Will Rodderick on the other side of the fence smiling at her.
            “Go on,” Kate said, “I’ll go find us a seat.”
Jayda made her way to the fence that separated the field from the stadium. Will’s eyes actually traveled down her body and back up, making Jayda feel as if she was more naked than clothed.
            “Jayda you look great, and those legs….” Will remarked, his eyes going back over her legs. Jayda blushed, unsure of how to respond to such a remark.
 Jaslyn appeared beside her in full gloating mode as she shot will a big flirty smile. “Doesn’t she look good? I mean, she still needs work, and losing a few pounds would do wonders, but she is still much better than she was.”,  Jaslyn stated as she was giving her younger sister a contemplative look.
Jayda knew her face had turned red, cheeks burning in mortification. Especially as a fourth party, Cade Walker, came up to the fence as well.
“What do you think of my project, Cade? I know, I’m a miracle worker.” Jaslyn beamed, as she tried to lean over the fence to kiss her boyfriend. Cade pulled back, though, not allowing her lips to even make contact, and basically ignored Jaslyn.
“I hate when you do that, Cade. All I was trying to do was kiss you.” Jaslyn whined, shooting Cade a glare.
Cade didn’t even look at Jaslyn, but at Jayda. His eyes done the same thing that Will’s had done, as he completely ignored Jaslyn’s whining. “You didn’t give her those legs, Jas.”
Jayda hadn’t thought she could be any more uncomfortable than she’d been a minute ago, but she’d been proven wrong. Cade’s lips tilted up at the side, giving a smile that said he knew exactly what his words had done, while Jaslyn frowned.
Will had started talking then, something about going with him to the usual hangout that everyone went to after a game. Before she knew it, she was agreeing to go with him, though she wasn’t sure why. Will had not really given her much attention until after her transformation. Now he was asking her out?
Jasyln began gushing over the fact that her baby sister was growing up and getting a date, finally. Cade had remained silent.

Present Day

The pilot’s voice came through the intercom, pulling Jayda from the past. Obviously he’d mentioned something about landing, because everyone began putting things away and buckling.
Jayda did the same, putting her sketch pad back in her satchel, and buckled. Finished, she stared ahead. Seven years, twenty pounds down, and a career later, and she still felt after effects of all that had happened with Cade. Someone who’d always had good morals and principles concerning all things, had given it all up for a boy who’d only ended up humiliating her.
That old cliché by Tennyson came to mind “Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all”. Usually she agreed with the greats. However, she’d wondered for a long time now, how it would feel to not have such a mortifying piece of your past always present with you.
The plane landed on the ground, giving the passengers a little jostle and Brock shot her a smile. She forced one back, and then took a deep breath.
“Charlotte, North Carolina, here we come.” Brock said with a smirk.

What did you think of chapter 1? Please let me know! Thank you so much for reading! 

Newbie

Hello everyone and welcome to my first blog post!
A little bit about myself: I'm a mother of three children and wife to an incredible husband. I've just graduated with my first college degree (it took forever). I've been a SAHM (stay at home mom) for nearly the entire time I've been a mother (which has been 14 wonderful years) minus a few years that I did work full time. My goal has never been to work for a big company or to climb a corporate ladder. My love for my children and the need to be with them has come before all else, and I've been blessed to be able to stay with them. However, my son is starting high school, my daughter in middle school, and my baby is a second grader. Needless to say that it is past time to figure out what mommy wants to do with herself.

Since graduating I've been asked one question over and over, you other college grads know exactly what question I'm talking about.
"What are you going to do now?"
or
"What can you use this degree for?"

My answer is "I don't know." Honestly, I have no idea. I've tried to find something that makes sense for my life and my family's crazy schedule, but I'm coming up short. The next question I've been asked is
"What do you enjoy doing?"

My one answer to that is super easy and is blurted out before I can stop it....
"I love to read and I love to write." 

If you could do the one thing that would make you happy right now, what would it be?

Can you answer that question honestly? I can, though it's always been hard for me to say out loud. Most people look at you funny when you say "Hey, I would like to become a writer". You can see all the things they want to say negative about that in their eyes.

  • It's hard to become successful at writing. 
  • There are so many people trying to get published these days.
  •  Do you have what it takes? 
  • You won't make a lot of money doing that if any at all. 

Believe me when I say, I've thought about all of this as well and yet I'm still sitting here at my computer on a blog that I created with writing in mind. I still want to try it, I still dream of writing that great book or blog post or article that people will enjoy reading.



Guess what...I've started on my first book (I'm co-writing it with my sister) and I'm so excited to finally be throwing all fears away and diving in!

So why did I start this blog?
I'll tell you. I thought...hmm how great would it be to have a place where you can submit a short story outline, or prologue, or first chapter and get instant feedback? Is there a place to do that where you submit your idea, and you have an honest, supportive audience to say "Yes, we love this idea" or "I don't think this will work very well"? I couldn't find one. So I made it.

Midnight Writer is for me and hopefully for you, yes you. The person reading this that may be in the same position I am in. The person who is thinking, I would really like to know if my story idea will even be liked by others. This is for us. I am in no way a professional writer, editor, or anything like that. I simply LOVE LOVE LOVE books, reading, creating, and living in a world of pure imagination.

Here's how it will work. I will post an intro to a story, outline, first chapter, prologue, ect. and hopefully you will read and give a thumbs up or thumbs down. If you aren't sure about the writing, or the story, please be honest, but not cruel. Use that opportunity to give constructive criticism. If you have an idea you would like to post and receive feedback on then let me know. The only thing I ask is that the profanity is kept to a minimum and no erotica please.

So what do you think of my hair-brained idea? Please comment and let me know! Thank you so much for reading and I look forward to hearing from you all soon!